An archive of scribblings.
Ripples form on the surface of a pond.
Below, fishes kiss the surface; above,
a turtle dives, a pond-skater skates.
Really like this Raven. It's only three lines but it seems to have a lot to tell me. I see this as a moment captured, or a piece showing the surface value of things, where the skater skating is just one part of the scene, there is an above and a below as well. A frozen pond was a great choice for a setting. Nice job. Thanks
Thanks for your feedback, Fred.I had it longer, but fundamentally it was just these three lines that mattered.
so much said for what's happening on, above and below the water, in 3 lines. :)
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