tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5462814069356368476.post5326802919073155721..comments2023-05-27T20:10:09.708+08:00Comments on Conversations the Other Day: To The Very EndRavenblackhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07408808375869234480noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5462814069356368476.post-64896065925802352192011-09-15T10:45:14.770+08:002011-09-15T10:45:14.770+08:00Thanks. :) I might on the next round. :)Thanks. :) I might on the next round. :)Ravenblackhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07408808375869234480noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5462814069356368476.post-10404091457689949012011-09-15T03:38:03.170+08:002011-09-15T03:38:03.170+08:00you are a wise poet.
your words speak beautiful mu...you are a wise poet.<br />your words speak beautiful music.<br /><br />keep it up.<br /><br />join us if you could.Hyde Park Poetry Palacehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04817313233737719262noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5462814069356368476.post-81127900921402764482011-08-26T06:43:50.441+08:002011-08-26T06:43:50.441+08:00Your words have the same quality of the nature you...Your words have the same quality of the nature you describe with such poetic detail: beauty.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5462814069356368476.post-17809015398016764752011-08-20T00:05:12.454+08:002011-08-20T00:05:12.454+08:00Thank you. I was trying to go for that.
Don'...Thank you. I was trying to go for that. <br /><br />Don't be away too long, Old Raven. I will miss your stories. :)Ravenblackhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07408808375869234480noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5462814069356368476.post-29708764504955719952011-08-19T22:04:39.844+08:002011-08-19T22:04:39.844+08:00Ravenblack ... so good to see you. One Raven says...Ravenblack ... so good to see you. One Raven says to another. I shall still be a good bit gone for a while. Although I realize it is not natural ... Hawk is also my very good friend, so the stanza:<br /><br />"becomes bored <br />preferring to sustain <br />a circling hawk."<br /><br />Was almost like sustenance for me. The icing upon the cake of your poem. This is a lovely poem ....with a special "lightness of being" about it.Liz Rice-Sosnehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14705708193546909432noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5462814069356368476.post-69283564856313476492011-08-19T05:52:43.629+08:002011-08-19T05:52:43.629+08:00Thanks, glad you enjoyed it, Anna. :)Thanks, glad you enjoyed it, Anna. :)Ravenblackhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07408808375869234480noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5462814069356368476.post-18132115535233629332011-08-18T11:15:17.514+08:002011-08-18T11:15:17.514+08:00You reach a wonderful state of transcendence with ...You reach a wonderful state of transcendence with this poem. A compact, pellucid meditation that points the reader to fathoms of depth. The image of the breeze tiring of the flower is pure magic. You use all the power of your great photographic eye to imbue this with the mystery and awe you capture so well in your photos. Thank you!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5462814069356368476.post-46653642079469026862011-08-18T10:12:54.906+08:002011-08-18T10:12:54.906+08:00I'm honored to be asked, Victoria. But I would...I'm honored to be asked, Victoria. But I wouldn't even know what topic to write about! :D I still feel like I'm learning the craft, not quite sure if there's anything I can talk about extensively. <br /><br />And thanks for your comment on my poem.Ravenblackhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07408808375869234480noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5462814069356368476.post-50594202883573875342011-08-18T07:21:45.717+08:002011-08-18T07:21:45.717+08:00Wonderful, crisp images, Raven.
Thanks so much for...Wonderful, crisp images, Raven.<br />Thanks so much for the extensive and insightful comments you left on my critique post. I'd like you to do a guest post sometime (on Wordsmith Wednesday) on any topic you choose. Is that something that would interest you? VictoriaAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5462814069356368476.post-21160496898578567912011-08-18T06:36:24.993+08:002011-08-18T06:36:24.993+08:00Thanks for reading, dsnake. I'm glad you like ...Thanks for reading, dsnake. I'm glad you like it. :)Ravenblackhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07408808375869234480noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5462814069356368476.post-31583621910808927272011-08-17T23:11:44.136+08:002011-08-17T23:11:44.136+08:00i didn't know a flower dropping can be so love...i didn't know a flower dropping can be so lovely & touching. :)<br /><br />i like the images you painted here, and the way the poem is structured. the title, which is also the last line is a nice touch.dsnake1https://www.blogger.com/profile/08724264906690080704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5462814069356368476.post-39599674543914745622011-08-17T22:00:38.445+08:002011-08-17T22:00:38.445+08:00Hi Cindy. Thanks for your comment. I was walking i...Hi Cindy. Thanks for your comment. I was walking in the park and saw the flowers on the ground -- they are just pretty to the very end.Ravenblackhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07408808375869234480noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5462814069356368476.post-89941880807941564622011-08-16T19:37:01.953+08:002011-08-16T19:37:01.953+08:00Hi Ravenblack. I read this yesterday and liked it...Hi Ravenblack. I read this yesterday and liked it very much. The simple element of nature and its life cycle that you portrayed is inspiring in that it sets a tone of peace and that I think is what we hope to feel when we interact in nature. I was truly inspired by your words. Thanks for sharing it.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5462814069356368476.post-40914442933815459692011-08-16T11:36:07.965+08:002011-08-16T11:36:07.965+08:00Appreciate your comment, Fred, thank you. :)Appreciate your comment, Fred, thank you. :)Ravenblackhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07408808375869234480noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5462814069356368476.post-67759686052861170222011-08-15T23:48:43.165+08:002011-08-15T23:48:43.165+08:00Great poem. Love how you structured this. Still a...Great poem. Love how you structured this. Still a flower/ Descend/ A breeze comes to carry you away/ Still A flower. The cycle works great and the imagery, especially in the last two stanzas is very niceAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05885047796180529498noreply@blogger.com