tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5462814069356368476.post1572196355861629141..comments2023-05-27T20:10:09.708+08:00Comments on Conversations the Other Day: The littlest thingsRavenblackhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07408808375869234480noreply@blogger.comBlogger34125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5462814069356368476.post-28990500167274519232012-07-04T17:05:03.570+08:002012-07-04T17:05:03.570+08:00Thanks Madeleine and Ami! :)Thanks Madeleine and Ami! :)Ravenblacknoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5462814069356368476.post-63377192118124513742012-07-04T14:46:24.916+08:002012-07-04T14:46:24.916+08:00Lovely work. You're making us all think!
{ami...Lovely work. You're making us all think!<br /><br />{ami}<br />http://sundrysumthins.wordpress.com/@amihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17536943954989130887noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5462814069356368476.post-65650423432437321652012-07-03T17:53:38.140+08:002012-07-03T17:53:38.140+08:00Lovely poem.Lovely poem.Madeleine Begun Kanehttp://www.madkane.com/humor_blog/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5462814069356368476.post-10051531000671761532012-07-03T13:13:26.436+08:002012-07-03T13:13:26.436+08:00Dave, Laurie, Fred, Tammy, Jannie, thank you!
Ov...Dave, Laurie, Fred, Tammy, Jannie, thank you! <br /><br />Oversewn -- logophilia exercise left over...*g*Ravenblacknoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5462814069356368476.post-78851955039454969172012-07-03T07:49:22.115+08:002012-07-03T07:49:22.115+08:00Okay, so WHAT happened? I'm guessing some one ...Okay, so WHAT happened? I'm guessing some one tried to cover up a tryst? :) The case of the olde new button. :)<br /><br />Great little poem!<br /><br />xooxJannie Funsterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11595786402510366043noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5462814069356368476.post-46769006032145919012012-07-03T05:37:32.289+08:002012-07-03T05:37:32.289+08:00sometimes when i sew a button on, i do it too tigh...sometimes when i sew a button on, i do it too tight, i like your tern "oversewn"Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5462814069356368476.post-50338619721170909592012-07-03T04:07:41.765+08:002012-07-03T04:07:41.765+08:00Very nice. Great use of button as metaphor here. ...Very nice. Great use of button as metaphor here. The way you detail the others hanging loose, and the other one being too uptight. Very cool depiction hereAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05885047796180529498noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5462814069356368476.post-91995451453366848302012-07-03T02:36:17.106+08:002012-07-03T02:36:17.106+08:00This says a whole lot... great piece!This says a whole lot... great piece!Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5462814069356368476.post-80203280800659014322012-07-02T19:00:56.393+08:002012-07-02T19:00:56.393+08:00Aha! Time for an investigation, obviously! A perfe...Aha! Time for an investigation, obviously! A perfect little poem.Dave Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08430484174826768488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5462814069356368476.post-26628346306718005322012-07-02T18:24:57.682+08:002012-07-02T18:24:57.682+08:00Dark Angel and Becky, thank you for your comments....Dark Angel and Becky, thank you for your comments.<br /><br />@Dark Angel -- thanks for sharing your take on this. I agree, we like we know; it takes a while to accept something new, or a change.Ravenblackhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07408808375869234480noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5462814069356368476.post-66744113360573507482012-07-02T16:30:23.559+08:002012-07-02T16:30:23.559+08:00tight writing...pinning down the button... unravel...tight writing...pinning down the button... unravelling my imaginationAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5462814069356368476.post-76882968638039108812012-07-02T13:44:07.518+08:002012-07-02T13:44:07.518+08:00I took it as metaphorical. How we brace against c...I took it as metaphorical. How we brace against change. The different thing, the new person, the replacement part is never quickly warmed up to. We like what we know. I often feel like that new button.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5462814069356368476.post-14333693858159199772012-07-02T07:57:08.659+08:002012-07-02T07:57:08.659+08:00Thanks to each of you. :) I'm glad the poem w...Thanks to each of you. :) I'm glad the poem worked out and that the mystery I attempted came across.Ravenblackhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07408808375869234480noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5462814069356368476.post-23682226119827284962012-07-02T03:48:02.383+08:002012-07-02T03:48:02.383+08:00recognisablerecognisableAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5462814069356368476.post-61426849427864468882012-07-02T02:36:12.356+08:002012-07-02T02:36:12.356+08:00The simplest things awry catch our attention. You ...The simplest things awry catch our attention. You magnified a situation for us here and made us all into wannabe detectives. Very deft and clever write.Beachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5462814069356368476.post-50817774388271728952012-07-02T01:51:26.549+08:002012-07-02T01:51:26.549+08:00I LOVE this poem - that is exactly how foreign a n...I LOVE this poem - that is exactly how foreign a newly sewn on button feels to the fingers. Great write.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5462814069356368476.post-29130181685811632502012-07-02T01:45:41.135+08:002012-07-02T01:45:41.135+08:00Simply a button or metaphor for a person...there a...Simply a button or metaphor for a person...there are so many questions. Who did sew on the button? or I have been comfortable with those around me..who is this that stirs my regulated life? Love it!!Susie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5462814069356368476.post-25098140735164100092012-07-02T01:44:36.342+08:002012-07-02T01:44:36.342+08:00a hint of mystery here, I think, the lines of the ...a hint of mystery here, I think, the lines of the poem gathering evidence as if through a detective's lens - really well done!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5462814069356368476.post-3347936848625377932012-07-02T01:41:20.368+08:002012-07-02T01:41:20.368+08:00Conscientiousness tells fascinating stories, as do...Conscientiousness tells fascinating stories, as does its lack. I enjoyed pondering the who and why here. Thank you!Anna Montgomeryhttp://chromapoesy.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5462814069356368476.post-89738036882837699322012-07-01T22:22:45.002+08:002012-07-01T22:22:45.002+08:00A really tight write, and possibly some hidden mea...A really tight write, and possibly some hidden meanings in there too, great stuff!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5462814069356368476.post-21667830258645713482012-07-01T22:02:26.276+08:002012-07-01T22:02:26.276+08:00I do love the mystery in this poem! You could wri...I do love the mystery in this poem! You could write a sequel, which would be fun to read.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5462814069356368476.post-1641450187448798582012-07-01T21:07:29.604+08:002012-07-01T21:07:29.604+08:00Thanks for the awesome responses, everyone. Much a...Thanks for the awesome responses, everyone. Much appreciated. :)Ravenblackhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07408808375869234480noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5462814069356368476.post-55512679599567882672012-07-01T20:45:51.021+08:002012-07-01T20:45:51.021+08:00A mystery here - subtle - Sherlockian! Human too....A mystery here - subtle - Sherlockian! Human too. k.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5462814069356368476.post-33779644055990976172012-07-01T20:40:19.537+08:002012-07-01T20:40:19.537+08:00that first moment when you realize that things hav...that first moment when you realize that things have changed and will never be the same again...aka_andreahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15388010898688586760noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5462814069356368476.post-55542528629256526092012-07-01T20:11:44.817+08:002012-07-01T20:11:44.817+08:00Very tightly written. You've sown questions th...Very tightly written. You've sown questions that lead one to ask about why the button obsesses the speaker. Buttons often hold secrets as much as they reveal, it seems.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08784125345525784337noreply@blogger.com