tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5462814069356368476.post1054729102453197898..comments2023-05-27T20:10:09.708+08:00Comments on Conversations the Other Day: I'll never get tired of treesRavenblackhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07408808375869234480noreply@blogger.comBlogger18125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5462814069356368476.post-20315811755605180742012-02-28T00:53:29.934+08:002012-02-28T00:53:29.934+08:00A tribute after my own heart!!!!!A tribute after my own heart!!!!!Ravenhttp://nohwhere.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5462814069356368476.post-772442924578505172012-02-27T20:57:25.832+08:002012-02-27T20:57:25.832+08:00Thanks everyone for the wonderful comments and fee...Thanks everyone for the wonderful comments and feedback. Really appreciate it. :)Ravenblackhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07408808375869234480noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5462814069356368476.post-13376567325911152512012-02-27T07:07:12.194+08:002012-02-27T07:07:12.194+08:00Oh me neither, I love the trees and all the offer....Oh me neither, I love the trees and all the offer. Canopy is a great word to use here. really like the pattern you sculpted here, then the one line that gets me the most here is the faces smiling, as it offers an emotion showing within the description itself. Really nice job Raven, thanks.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05885047796180529498noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5462814069356368476.post-24031285790798035502012-02-27T06:07:13.757+08:002012-02-27T06:07:13.757+08:00Great take on the prompt. I felt like I was peekin...Great take on the prompt. I felt like I was peeking through the branches of a tree. Lovely.Victoriahttp://liv2write2day.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5462814069356368476.post-37989205938231503592012-02-26T23:36:40.742+08:002012-02-26T23:36:40.742+08:00Very fluid and a perfect 'tree sculpture' ...Very fluid and a perfect 'tree sculpture' in words--all trees are a sculpture to the right eye, I think. Liked this much.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5462814069356368476.post-12619492553384636782012-02-26T23:31:23.379+08:002012-02-26T23:31:23.379+08:00I think you have sculpted an exquisite piece of ar...I think you have sculpted an exquisite piece of art through your poetry!Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5462814069356368476.post-34592342638804924462012-02-26T22:26:46.362+08:002012-02-26T22:26:46.362+08:00using nature as a metaphor always works for me..th...using nature as a metaphor always works for me..this is lovely image ~ <br /><br />great to see you writing again ~Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5462814069356368476.post-33152802168707684812012-02-26T21:43:24.953+08:002012-02-26T21:43:24.953+08:00Beautiful! I like the placements of words in your...Beautiful! I like the placements of words in your poem. It conveys the idea well of being beneath a tree and looking up!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5462814069356368476.post-68398332127890194342012-02-26T21:25:09.746+08:002012-02-26T21:25:09.746+08:00This is wonderful, both for it's sculpting and...This is wonderful, both for it's sculpting and for its imagery. A really fabulous write on all counts :)Daydreamertoohttp://daydreamertoo.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5462814069356368476.post-65174700465120796432012-02-26T20:42:02.613+08:002012-02-26T20:42:02.613+08:00I like what you did, good poem! Not only did the w...I like what you did, good poem! Not only did the words capture the image you were creating and flow well together, the visual placement reinforced the theme.Frank Watsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11512960953837979822noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5462814069356368476.post-44428198782581605112012-02-26T17:38:00.575+08:002012-02-26T17:38:00.575+08:00No harm, certainly! I've been trying to do thi...No harm, certainly! I've been trying to do this for years! Absolutely love it.Dave Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08430484174826768488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5462814069356368476.post-35888367066848454812012-02-26T16:33:43.093+08:002012-02-26T16:33:43.093+08:00just yesterday i stood under a birch tree and was ...just yesterday i stood under a birch tree and was just fascinated again by the beauty they breathe...well captured..Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5462814069356368476.post-86619761137309959982012-02-26T15:33:11.668+08:002012-02-26T15:33:11.668+08:00Beautiful...it is a coincidence we are using the s...Beautiful...it is a coincidence we are using the same theme.JANUhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06983287092498427967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5462814069356368476.post-23221498170359662062012-02-26T15:04:03.389+08:002012-02-26T15:04:03.389+08:00Oh I am a tree hugging hippie so this poem is a fa...Oh I am a tree hugging hippie so this poem is a favourite... I love the style and feel...it's like you sprinkled your words like sunlight through the trees.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5462814069356368476.post-258643121878752942012-02-26T13:48:24.888+08:002012-02-26T13:48:24.888+08:00I'll never get tired of trees either...this fe...I'll never get tired of trees either...this felt so light and just made me feel good in reading it...lovely.Bodhirosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12630769135515322096noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5462814069356368476.post-6043588523355444272012-02-26T13:37:10.459+08:002012-02-26T13:37:10.459+08:00Brian: thanks! :D
Oceangirl: thank you. :)Brian: thanks! :D<br /><br />Oceangirl: thank you. :)Ravenblackhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07408808375869234480noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5462814069356368476.post-41666080983005600262012-02-26T12:59:51.165+08:002012-02-26T12:59:51.165+08:00I think this is exactly what Victoria meant, sculp...I think this is exactly what Victoria meant, sculptured, multilayered, using a poet's tool. A very lovely poem.Lisahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02399300464457820101noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5462814069356368476.post-21503670572994581932012-02-26T12:25:18.799+08:002012-02-26T12:25:18.799+08:00actually you are fine...she did say you could use ...actually you are fine...she did say you could use a shape or ...it works...smiles...lovely imagery...the light filtering through...of course i am a sucker for nature as well...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.com