Sunday, April 19, 2015

The little green dot on the who's-online


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Facebook pillar-peeping


Him:

only her name matters
to me.

a hundred likes
without her 
means nothing.

hiding my presence
spying on her
status : she's is

         on.

did she see
what i just posted?

i wait

          I score!



Her:

a hundred likes i gave
today.

i'm here.
looking at you.

and you and you and you

    and you
     do you see me?



Him:

i see her, should i let her
see me?

        Here i am.

but she's gone

      
       off.

    


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updated: 18/05/2015

updated: 10 November 2015

2 comments:

kaykuala said...

Checking in on the 'likes' can be deceptively amusing. Nicely Ravenblack!

Hank

Ravenblack said...

Thanks :)