Wednesday, May 29, 2013

Quiet, and where to find it in a city that sleeps very little.


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The space to be

Cars go by every few
sleeper's
exhale;

in between


crickets,  


in between


recalling trees
and mountains.


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Updated 19th July 2013

2 comments:

dsnake1 said...

this is a really beautiful poem. i like the use of the spaces between the lines. very visual in a quiet, sparse way. :)

Ravenblack said...

Thanks dsnake. Glad that got through. :)