Spider vs AntsI watched a platoon of ants dancedangerously with a spider:a game of merry-go-round,pincer against pincer,compound eyes againstcompound eyes.The spider rotates,the ants touch his legs;on every side he is attacked in turnturn turn turnunable to hold his ground,spider leaps offleaving a single thread of webthe ants begin to wonder wanderunable to comprehend the spider's( surprise )lacitrevescape;they begin to scatter, leaving behind one antwhose feelers are caught on the sticky threadof the one spider,spiderat large.
Thursday, April 26, 2012
NaPoWriMo #26: Daily thrillers
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9 comments:
i like this, the rhythm reminds me of the ants dance
Aha! Great rhythm and story! Ants had better stick together, two legs short! K.
oh that ant is in big trouble...haha...love the concrete of vertical...made me pause a second and a really nice smooth progression...i like...
This is awesome! Love the daily thriller and vertical trailing down the page, just fantastic writing.
Nice write Raven. really like the way you really harnessed what projective form can offer a piece. The vertical line is super cool. Thanks
Nice creative tale...and I like the format of the words...this would make a good children's story book ~
Hope all is well with you ~
Thanks everyone. :)
Appreciated the feedback and comments!
It's been a busy week. Haven't visited as many blogs as I would like to, nor took part in the open links and prompt as I had wanted to. Sometimes I have a hard time deciding how to divide my time and attention. I definitely can't keep this up for much longer than a month!
how can the spider lose?
great write,anyway, :)
Too many ants. :)
I did see this happen btw. :)
Thanks dsnake.
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