Wednesday, April 25, 2012

NaPoWriMo #25: Reflection

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Snapshot

She's looking out
                             reflecting
the window   |   window the
reflecting

     me, who   |   who me

chewing on the wire of her headphone,

her eyes    |    eyes her
phone       |       phone

hovering
        mid sentence. 







Another busy week.

4 comments:

Fred Rutherford said...

I really like the mirrored verse here. Very cool. Thanks

Ravenblack said...

Glad that you like. Thanks for your visits, Fred.

chromapoesy.com said...

This is a cool concept :).

dsnake1 said...

very cool form.
and a very keen observation.