Tuesday, April 24, 2012

NaPoWriMo #24: Homebound

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all aboard the bus
speaking tongues of Babylon
share a journey home







7 comments:

Fred Rutherford said...

Nice. Really digging your haiku. I just love the order here- Bus/Tongues-Babylon/journey home. Very nice Raven. Thanks

Ravenblack said...

Thanks Fred. :) Got the idea for it on the bus coming home.

Brian Miller said...

see i would love that bus trip...i love public transport though...so many people, so many stories...

manicddaily said...

Very nice. Accurate but has a kind of sweetness and warmth. A definite point of view even in few words. Thanks. K.

chromapoesy.com said...

Wonderful.

Ravenblack said...

Brian, K and Anna: thanks a bunch. :)

dsnake1 said...

that's true.