Wednesday, April 18, 2012

NaPoWriMo #18: Another Office Haiku (and one more pleasant)

Office Haiku #2


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circling in red
crossing out calendar dates
days to vacation

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Of sunset


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watch the sunset paint
clouds in shades of lavender
in frames drawn at dusk


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8 comments:

dsnake1 said...

two lovely pieces of work.

i am smiling at the first one, absolutely brilliant. :)

Pat Hatt said...

Well I'm not circling, but I sure am counting..haha

chromapoesy.com said...

I agree, lovely! I think you're solving that puzzle very well.

Victoria said...

Enjoyed them both...especially the sunset. I'm crossing off days when I have to leave my desert retreat and return to real life!

Fred Rutherford said...

Very nice. So true to the work one. And love the way the sunset piece came out, wonderful imagery here. thanks

Ravenblack said...

dsnake, Pat, Anna, Victoria and Fred:
Thanks for the read, comments and feedback.

Victoria: desert retreat -- sounds peaceful. Enjoy the rest of your getaway. :)

manicddaily said...

Wonderful! I can (We can) very much relate. Ha. Well done. K.

Ravenblack said...

:)